Manhattan Beach/On the Waterfront in Brooklyn
SPOILER ALERT! · Massive amount of research into neighborhoods, syndicates, diving and maritime subjects, the era, opptys open to
women · Characters are appealing · Kerrigan and Styles are too similar. Confusing to keep them separated. Kerrigan is becoming like Styles until he is “killed.” Both have daughters and are killers presumably. Kerrigan turning into Styles · Murky: why Kerrigan is almost murdered by Styles and why Styles is murdered · Renewal courtesy of the sea;